Progressing Ideas

Progressing Ideas:

- Recurring events
- Have the protagonist calling his girlfriend at the beginning before the song begins.
- Make him look like he is in love at the beginning, then hating his partner at the end.
- Main character not in band; band performance cuts through narrative.
- Thought bubbles tell audience what he is thinking, as there will be no  sound from the narrative.

Rough Notes:
- Watch.
- Thought bubbles
- Heads in his hands
- Walk around the room
- Over the shoulder, where you can see the empty plates

Idea For a Scene:
- Cut to the protagonist's house before he starts getting angry and breaking things things.
- When he is waiting for his girlfriend to return home to the meal he has prepared for them we see shots of him gazing at the clock.