Feedback From Our Rough Cut

• good close ups
• the close up of the phone was good however screen wasn't too clear
• lip sync was good most of the time, some areas need to be adjusted
• it comes across like there may be a possible gay relationship between the two characters
• possibly add a girl in the video
• performance was good and enthusiastic
• maybe add some night time footage
• sunset shot was popular
• the style of song works well with our narrative
• the pace of the editing becomes slowly throughout the video 
• more costumes and costume changes
• some of the shots used were a bit shaky
• horses seemed to irrelevant